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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sun melting traces Tracks leading from here to there Shadows calm in light |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karilea, this sounds comforting to me. I feel that you know the path leading to the light, even if the sun melts the traces. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
But the shadows will never reign while the Sun is leading the way... lovely write, lovely you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A serene image Karilea. beautiful M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
short sweet and well worth the read sometimes the smalles are the hardest at least to one who expounds in "massive missives" laughing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow! What a great new photo of you!  ~ and your poem is as beautiful as you yourself are!  I have missed reading you while I have been away! Love & Light, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most pleasing and well thought message, thanx KJ.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful....serene...lovely. Mush like you dear lady. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Your poem is very pretty and soothing, Sunshine. Thank you for sharing. Sadie |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ahhhh...makes me want to take a walk in a meadow or the woods. Walking toward the light is always good and filled with rejoicing. Nicely written ... hugs, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very peaceful karilea~ helps me to remember that spring is right around the corner....  ~~**~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very comforting scene you have painted here...very well done |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, perhaps the tracks of others on the path will fade with time, but the Light will light the way Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is splendid very warm and touching to me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita, you are so welcome. I only hope I do. I know it feels so familiar... Donna...keep that in your prayers for me, ok? Maree...your acknowledgements are always met with a nod, and smile... "Death"...you live beyond your time, and you keep the rest of us at breathing level, above the water....thank you. Linda...we have missed you even more! and thank you, Magnus.... Yea, Enchantress, mush likes me...  Sadie, you keep sharing too, OK? Martie, I have a few places you would like to walk, as I know you have, too. We'll do it, OK? Lauren...sooner than you know! Steven...thank you so much for reading! Dixie...you are our little pixie in the dark...always bumping things when they are hidden...thank you. Virginia? I am so VERY glad that this poem brought something to your mind...something very lovely, and needed by more than you realize. Thank you so much for taking this up...and passing it on.  |
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