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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2004-02-23 01:28 PM

Your words consume like fire
they rage, blow
A gathering wall
of desperate echoes
roll across the eastern sky
shadow me in darkness
Then
i will hear your cry
and it will burn
white, molten
Sear
a conscience
dipped in salt water
again
again
and again
Till i smell the earth
in all your wonder
and taste sweet drops
of forgiving rain

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-02-23 01:30 PM

This is incredibly beautiful Robert!
Well done.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

2 posted 2004-02-23 01:30 PM

Robert,

Really enjyed the vivid energy of this poem ~P

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-02-23 03:53 PM

Robert~
There have been times that I begged for the rain ... and times I've been the rain~

This is wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-02-25 05:02 PM

shadow me in darkness
Then
i will hear your cry

~*~

Sometimes our senses need
to be shadowed, Robert,
so that we are inclined
to make the most of them...

A good read, Sir. Thank you.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2004-02-26 12:29 PM

Sometimes forgivness brings the rain....that turns into thunderstorms....

~ARh

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-02-26 02:53 AM

wow, fantastic!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2004-02-26 08:46 AM

Forgivness is a powerful tool.
Interesting poem.

Deb

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-02-26 08:50 AM

Robert,
Well said enjoyed the read.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-02-29 04:35 PM

Very strong poem -- very powerful emotions expressed.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

10 posted 2004-02-29 07:37 PM

Hi Robert

Wonderful imagery seen here through your well written words.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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