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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-23 10:39 AM

Self Whisperings

I will always care,
despite my disappearance.
For the winds have shifted and
no longer drift me towards
the comfort that once was.
I see the truth and for once
its reflection sees me.
So I press my words to my soul,
guide my heart within boundaries
and let go of what never could be mine.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-02-23 10:48 AM

"For the winds have shifted and
no longer drift me towards
the comfort that once was."

That is inspirational!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2004-02-23 10:51 AM

oh, I have been where this is...sigh...very well written lady....very well

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2004-02-23 10:54 AM

Giving up something can oft times be as hard
As holding on to it.
Another excellent write
Full of emotion

Gloom

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-02-23 01:07 PM

me too

me too M

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2004-02-23 04:37 PM

So I press my words to my soul,
guide my heart within boundaries
and let go of what never could be mine.

~*~

Maureen...you're dripping ink all over...
and that's a good thing!

I'm glad to see your muse has struck!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-23 04:52 PM

Very nice! Grover.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

7 posted 2004-02-23 05:20 PM

Maureen-

This is a wonderful piece of poetry. It gives credibilty to the old cliche on whispers speaking loudly.

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-02-23 08:25 PM

beautiful writing of such heartfelt emotions;
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Sadie

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