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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stripped I peel back each layer by layer onion skin of my disappearing heart |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Each layer Peeled Slow and pained With tears Doesn’t diminish The heart Growing With each serving Of emotion with a heart like yours you’ll never run out of layers Gloom |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
It won't disappear, Helen. It's just unfolding and shedding what it no longer needs. Love will make it grow again. Nice write, I felt it. ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
onions bring tears to eyes...so do your writings  hugs sis |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Helen...simply stated with such beauty. Eric |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
onions and tears go hand in hand .... but the sweetest part is the center, bare *S |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
They are only the dry tattered days falling away from your nourishing soul |
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