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Open Poetry #31
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Amature2
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0 posted 2004-02-22 10:31 PM



"Everybody's lost
But they're pretending they're not
Lost"........Morrissey
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Krawdad
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1 posted 2004-02-22 10:40 PM

Aloft on a draft
carried high across the sky
Destination blue
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-02-22 11:00 PM

must be nice...maybe soon I'll go there too
steavenr
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3 posted 2004-02-22 11:55 PM

very well done...I love the consistency of the theme of your verbs and the word "aimless" ...tight and well managed...they convey the mind in an orderly fashion...nice
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