My Forbidden Love (any revision?)

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Open Poetry #31

My Forbidden Love (any revision?)

chinadude89
Junior Member

since 2004-02-03

Posts 31
Texas

0 posted 2004-02-22 05:17 PM

(its pretty suspensful in a way, the first 3 stanzas but then it gets happy in the end...)

I stared into her hypnotic eyes,
And she stares right back into mine.
We walked in the park under the starry night sky,
And settled down for some wine.
We talked and talked all night long,
And when we walked home,
She sung a song.
That was beautiful enough to make me cry and moan.
In the end we kissed at last.
Then we walked onto her patio,
And there we sat.
Then a gun shot was sounded and there were movements nearby.
When I turned around,
Something surely made me cry.

You can always make me smile,
No matter what I feel inside.
You've fought away all of my fears,
And ridden all of my tears.
Oh your fantasy,
Your heart-melting smile.
Please my darling,
Come watch the sunset fade away.
Come watch the stars glow so bright.
Come watch the moonlight shine with pride
Let's go reminisce,
Talk away,
Just please stay a while.

Please hold your last breath,
But please don't say goodbye.
Please don't follow Death.
Just please don't say you'll die.
You are everything to me:
You are the one that sparked my life.
You are the one that set my spirit free.
You are the one that drew away my calling knife.

We have been through oh so much.
We visit, dance and sing and play.
You are my forbidden love.
You are the highlight of all my days.
I gave you this kiss
To show you I care,
And now you take me to the abyss?
Oh your pain, I cannot bear.
Stay with me,
Be with me.
Say something.
At least whisper please...
My forbidden love.

I was in the waiting room,
Then the doctor came out of the E.R.
He smiled.
I went in and saw her.
Kissed her.
We left the next day,
Mom saw us together,
"Who is this?" she glared at me.
"...My forbidden love."

[This message has been edited by chinadude89 (02-23-2004 07:17 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-02-23 09:17 AM

You are everything to me.
You are the one that sparked my life.
You are the one that set my spirit free.

I'm glad this had a happy ending. *S*

chinadude89
Junior Member

since 2004-02-03

Posts 31
Texas

2 posted 2004-02-23 07:17 PM

i still dont no wat u mean...

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