Open Poetry #31 |
Daddy's Eyes (duet with Ringo) |
stottbear94 Junior Member
since 2003-10-10
Posts 11Living in Daddy's Eyes |
When I look into Daddy's eyes There is something that I see Tell me, Daughter, what Something tells me No matter what I do or say His love is just for me For you, my daughter, always Fun and music are fine with me Laughter and fun are great with me You shall have them both Mostly what I see in Daddy's eyes When I'm hurt or I'm scared What I see in my daughter's eyes The love, the hope, the trust Is that he will never let me fall Keep writing |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
standing and clapping what a precious gift! for you both ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Simply beautiful you two,,hold onto that feeling, treasure it, its somethng you will always look back on and hold dear,very awsum job Bear and Ringo,,,, hugs Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
You two make a great team, this was an outstanding write, you both blend together very well!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A father/daughter duet! Possibly a first for Passions? This is beautiful...cherish the bond you two have built. And please...du-et again soon! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautiful!! I'm so glad you shared this with us. believe in what your heart feels... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed the read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Excellent, loving duet... I like this very much! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel group hug) Awwwwwwwww, this is just precious, sweet friends, the love of a father and daughter is one of the most beautiful gifts of all, and you both shine with its gift, yay! (smiles) God Bless You Both forever, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Stott and Bradly, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice style. Very good work! Grover. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
On behalf of my daughter, I would like to thank everyone for responding with such supporting thoughts... She goes nuts over the fact that people actually read what she's written Never be afraid to try something new. Remember that a lone amateur |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This was very touching! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful indeed . . . I nearly missed this one your Dad steered me to it and so grateful that he has. It has givenme a smile this morning thank you and actually the both of you hold each other up *smile* |
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