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Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2004-02-21 08:26 PM

I sat here gazing today
Nothing special
Just looking into the beyond
Somehow, I saw you
Your face
Your smile
I don't know why
I cannot explain it
Not with words

With the hatred we share
Reserved for me
Something I gave to you
Emotions inside
The hurt
The pain
Yet, there you were
Watching with that smile
Your loving eyes

Understanding finally came
My heavy heart
Lighter soul weighing me down
Emotions all wrong
The need
The ache
Leads me to know
After all of the tears
I love you still

But now the animal is in pain...
And now it's starting to rain...
But I'm still the same.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

1 posted 2004-02-21 08:51 PM

Se'lah Ringo, Se'lah

The things that my soul refused to touch are as my sorrowful meat..

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-02-21 09:18 PM

echo to the rebel
and were only human ringo afterall
this bleeds very niceley

Serra_Avatar
Member

since 2004-01-11

Posts 58

3 posted 2004-02-21 09:53 PM

"echo to the rebel
and were only human ringo afterall
this bleeds very niceley"

ditto...

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2004-02-21 10:24 PM

Love never dies and is never forgotten, beautifully written and touching!

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2004-02-22 12:37 PM

LR- Thanks.

inkedgoddess- I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Serra- ditto (ok ok, I couldn't help it. lol)

marcel- unfortunately, you are sooo right.

But now the animal is in pain...
And now it's starting to rain...
But I'm still the same.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-22 01:54 AM

Amazing; enjoyed totally!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-22 04:42 AM

echoing everyone above

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2004-02-22 08:38 AM

very well done my man, your writing touches deep, some people are fools to pass up on the love given them,,,,
michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-02-22 09:42 AM

Oh yes!
Excellent write Ringo!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

10 posted 2004-02-22 10:30 AM

iliana- I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

shadows- echoing the meny thanks I have given you from before and even till now.

Michelle- It truly is sad. It is her loss... and mine. Thanks mucho.

Nancy- You are always so free with your kind words. Thanks again.

Never be afraid to try something new. Remember that a lone amateur
built the Ark. A large group of professionals built the Titanic.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2004-02-22 05:24 PM

(big angel hugs) This is sad but beautiful, dearest friend, it can be both a blessing and a curse but I believe you just have to filter the warmth from the tears and then move on, as no warmth should be taken for granted but doesn't belong in the pie! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2004-02-23 09:14 AM

Sometimes, it's beyond all explanation... love does endure when all logic says it shouldn't. *S* Excellent write!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

13 posted 2004-02-23 09:32 AM

"After all the tears, I love you still"
Tragic and true. That love will stay with you forever, as you find your way... ~K~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

14 posted 2004-02-23 10:41 AM

Thanks for sharing this - I've seen this...so much strength to still love despite the pain...he thought I hated him though...I never did hate him...I was only hurt and angry. Thanks; stirs up my youth

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

15 posted 2004-02-23 01:10 PM

Noah- You are always too kind. Thanks again.

suthern- If only it truly endured... Thank you.

kahlil- That's actually what I'm worried about... that it WILL stay with me forever... Thanks for reading this.

Copperbell- Thank you for the kind words.

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