Open Poetry #31 |
One Last Time |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Before you go And leave, I guess, We better say the words for the sake of love. If we won't let our love to be alive, For the one last time, We used to say these three words Then you can realise, How much our love meant to be? Together, If you still believe, Our love is over, But if you leave, Please take this love with you. And remember take of yourself and if you need me, I will be there for you But for last time, Please say you care and love As much I say to you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So tender, your sweet words! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
We so need to hear those words don't we vandana? Lovely. Chris "At one glance |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, dearest friend, let's hope this is never the last time though as you deserve happiness eternally, yay, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch hugs you |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was lovely vandana. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
i know that particular feeling... i understand completely where ure writing from. hope all goes well. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully expressed Vandana. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Vandana, Your poem shows such love and sensitivity. I enjoyed it very much. Sadie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how we all need to hear those words Vandana. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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