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TANKA No. 2 - I Yearn to Paint
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TANKA No. 2 - I Yearn to Paint |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Azure clouds on white backdrop, inverted chord of nature calls to me, to sing the sky upside down silent lullaby of sound. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I am really loving these new tankas of yours, sweet friend, nature poetry always deeply enthralls me and brings joy to my heart, reminding me of the Sioux proverb, "To touch the earth is to have harmony with nature." (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love painting too and hope soon I can be good like Bob Ross, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
MORE MORE MORE!!!!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Mistletoe Noah -- you are so kind to me sweet friend. I have never been a trained artist -- I know nothing of it except I have tried painting on several occasions on my own and really, really enjoy it -- with I really knew how! .......hugs, jo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dixie, I'm working on it. I am enjoying learning this new form of poetry -- glad you liked it! luv ya, jo |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Azure clouds on white backdrop, inverted chord of nature calls to me, to sing the sky upside down silent lullaby of sound. Your write is truly heaven iliana, simply beautiful. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
liked the playful and whimsical feel to this |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Iliana A few words to your talent. Dave A summer day beckons Dreaming of a bronze night a firey day Singing silent |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice, indeed! Grover. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
And you have painted a beautiful picture in my mind...thank you. Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Really nice - enjoyed. Chris "At one glance |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
iliana, This was nice... Have you gotten out that brush lately? If the paint flows like your poetry, it's time you steal 20 minutes of time here and to do it! (I'm looking forward to seeing you in N.Y. at the art galleries!) Sadie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You just did it and quite beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Two words....well done I love this form .....enjoyed ______ice ><> |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well done! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ahhhhh I wish I could paint this way.... ~~**~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"to sing the sky upside down" ...such a vivid sentence...once again, you have outdone yourself |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wish I had your colors . . . and your brush strokes my friend...lovely. jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Paint us a vision, that we might see, that we might touch ever lightly. That we might gasp in frozen amaze still standing and viewing for days |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jo~ OH MY !! You are a word-artist for sure !! This is stunningly lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Thank you all so very much for your comments! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so very very splendid!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Been breathing in the fumes from the oil paints and turpentine? LOL, I loved this, may have to paint it just as you wrote it someday, for fun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent use of the form...enjoyed Perhaps the world we see is always upsidedown, maybe on this day you viewed the world as it really is? You may have viewed reality for a moment, who knows? Anyway, I love the poem... Thank You _______ice ><> |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 liked this |
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