Open Poetry #31 |
My Disgusting Self |
Justin Deen New Member
since 2004-01-22
Posts 7London, UK |
I look at you I feel sick Don't look at me You prick Sunken eye's Bones, skin Metabolism! Very thin Unknown face Do you, Have a race? No space? Hurt, pain All tears Heart? No Just fears... ...I hate me |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) This is such a heartaching and poignant debut, sweet friend, know that you are truly special and soon you will see the essence of you and love youself more than you can imagine, God Bless You, we all go through these phases as it is part of growing up! Welcome to Passions, sweet Justin, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Justin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family…. please check your email for a special greeting Kindly Greeneyes~ ~~**~~ I lie awake at night |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
we all have different faces, it always better when you see on the inside and others too, I think..welcome |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Welcome Justin Interesting write. Painting a vivid but pretty dismal picture with this one. I can't believe that this is anyone you know. Very creative. Keep posting. Looking forward to reading more of your works. Garfield |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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