Open Poetry #31 |
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Yellow Footprints |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes ![]() |
Sixty men Dying together Living alone Maggots and slimey worms Crawling through the sand HatredPainHonor A warrior born Tradition and Pride Mountains of volcanic ash Rosenthal's glory Fighting on frozen ground Not one Brother left behind Starting life Grabastic pieces Becoming in the purest form A man This is dedicated to all of those who saw the yellow footprints and survived. But now the animal is in pain... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful writing. Eric |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Very powerful poem! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I like this, so strong. Makes me think of the epitome of Marine movies,,,Full Metal Jacket..... You do have such a wonderful way of putting your ideas across. Take care,,,, hugs Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Excellent writing, Ringo. ![]() Hugs ![]() Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, your heart lends a compassionate hand to many and I pray for all those who did lose loved ones in this natural disaster, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This is excellent writing! Grover. |
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Ringo![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Eric- Thanks for the kind words. illusion. Thanks for reading it. Michelle- Thanks. That particular movie got closest. ethyl- You are always so kind. Noah- Once again, I appreciate your words of encouragement. Grover- Thank you. But now the animal is in pain... |
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