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If we kissed
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If we kissed |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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What would happen if you kissed me will you pretend that you would miss me? Would your heart crave one more? Or would you forget me like once before. Ice cold rain drops dripping off your crimson face. Your eyes how they glow in the moonlight. Will you hold me tight tonight? Would the stars twinkle again oh so bright? Your hands as they caress my hips your lips your sweet sweet tender lips oh how I yern for one last kiss just like once before let me feel them like i felt your love once more. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very good ... if it were up to me, such a kiss would be given... jwesley |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
passionate. mwah! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, I hope you get that kiss that you desire so much.  Hugs  Ethel |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
Kisses are hard to stop craving, aren't they? Nice poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I don't think he'd have to pretend he misses you... This was really nice Julie Much Enjoyed! Richy |
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