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Rose Petal Angel |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58
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Rose Petal Angel There is a little lullaby I would sing for you about a rose petal angel and how my fondness for her grew She is so beautiful in my mind’s eye that now I have feelings I can no longer deny This rose petal angel… you know her name look in a mirror and you will find her just the same I can think of no other way to describe "her". Luckly she isn't home right now so I can hold off on sending it. I keep going over and over it but it just doesn't seem good enough. What do you all think? feel free to brutaly critique it....roast it, toast it, chop it into tiny little pieces just don't make me cry...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...leave it on her pillow... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
It's absolutely perfect Serra Because, it came from you... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ron~ It's just delicately perfect~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful soft words....indeed leave it for her... ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Avatar, this is beautiful...you should tell her, with this poem |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
This would go great with a bottle of wine, flowers and Vivaldi. A true success, definetly go with this!! |
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