Open Poetry #31 |
Hidden ( Lessons Of Shadows 2) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
She stood in front of me blocked from the glare of sun unblinded by that which burned and whispered I should in quiet stand Cutting my shadow from the ground she rolled it into small then folded it once to make it disappear leaving only hers to grace the clay I did not belive this real a trick I thought my mind to play and felt the unsolid fear of having lost my soul Then her hands began in magic to amaze as she unfolded once the part of me I thought gone and let it unwind in lay on the sand covering hers again with darker shades of me "You see," she said, "I am always there" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then her hands began in magic to amaze as she unfolded once the part of me I thought gone and let it unwind in lay on the sand covering hers again with darker shades of me "You see," she said, "I am always there" ~*~ I'm thinking [hoping] there will be a part three... I'm betting her name sounds like music on the wind, too... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good images... great poem! Grover. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
awaiting the next installment, I see more coming out of this one....and I'm lovin every minute of it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, there has to be a part three...right Ron?.....Ron? another keeper Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron So magical! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
and library ~~**~~ |
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