Open Poetry #31 |
coffee colored memories |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Always a coffee drinker, I was not after the taste so much, but the much needed drug. My son, my baby boy that life turned into a man much too soon, took time off work one day, showing up with gift in hand - a cup of coffee, a cup of that really really good much too expensive for a momma working to make ends meet coffee. One taste and my mouth was in heaven... oh my...I was obviously thinking...coffee this good should be sinful; his eyes glowed with the pleasure of my delight. We grew up within a smile shortage and so to even the scales, God gifted him with a smile contagious and my Chris always found ways to spread it. Last year at twenty-nine, my baby left this earth and for all the time that I am chained to this earth, November’s days will black as coffee be, but coffee will forever hold his smiling memory. [This message has been edited by jellybeans (02-19-2004 09:23 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh, this touched me so.... heart hugs to you for this beautiful expression of love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Then drink up, my friend... and enjoy every smile. *S* This touches me so much... reminds me of how he remembered and celebrated you with the little things that felt so big to the heart. Beautiful work... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always from the heart my friend..as are my thoughts for you at such times.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
jellybeans, you are definitely gourmet wonderful touching write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGirl~ It's often difficult for me to read these pieces without tears ... so I can just imagine the difficulty for you in penning them~ If sharing helps (and I believe that it does) ... know that as you share these feelings with those of us who love you ... you give us a tender look into the depth of a mother's loss~ Love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< [email protected] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all so much, and yes my sharing is from the depths, every parent knows that depth...there is so much I don't want to forget...sigh...and so I write, even though its hard....thank you for the caring reception of my pain |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i feel this down to my soul... and it could not be more beautifully expressed.... i know those "Novembers" of my own life, a pain shared... and my friendship extended to you in a huge hug ~Dawn |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you both, and muted, yes I understood from toe's poem that you also have a loss that you are dealing with, sending hugs back... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jellybeans, Chris, I am sure would have enjoyed your words, and the smile you leave us with in the end. Thanks for sharing this cup with us. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
can I just say ? |
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Serra_Avatar Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 58 |
Ah...The sweet nature of a mothers love |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Such a sad story Wonderful to have a smell that will always be around, that reminds you of your dear child Blessings to you Jelly Beans Thank You for sharing this Richy |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It is a terrible thing to love that which death can touch, hard to live without taking the risk, harder still to untangle the feelings to serve them for our understanding. I salute you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tender ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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