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Open Poetry #31

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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2004-02-18 08:14 AM

Vengeful are the clouds overhead,

Circling with a vultures` wingspread.

Darker and darker they bloom.

Though I walk this mortal planet,

I feel I should be exhumed.

Maybe it’s the surroundings,

Or I took one too many poundings,

But my heart no longer functions.

Alas I no longer smile.

What have I done that’s worthwhile?

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-02-18 09:31 AM

you exist, and that is worthwhile

i enjoyed this, the flow...nice

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

2 posted 2004-02-19 02:24 PM

Worth comes from more than actions.

I like your poem.

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