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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
0 posted 2004-02-17 06:00 PM



I feal the winter's cold breeze.
All warmth is cradled within
tortured by the memory:
The summer sun's soothing warmth
and it's forgotten promise
my falling tears now freeze.
I miss my warmthanf my light.
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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-02-17 08:15 PM

I don't get the last line of this otherwise great poem:"I miss my warmthanf my light." Grover.
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams
2 posted 2004-02-17 10:15 PM

Heheheh Wwoooopssss!

I miss my warmth and my light.

sorry!

);
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