Open Poetry #31 |
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forgotten promiss |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams ![]() |
I feal the winter's cold breeze. All warmth is cradled within tortured by the memory: The summer sun's soothing warmth and it's forgotten promise my falling tears now freeze. I miss my warmthanf my light. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I don't get the last line of this otherwise great poem:"I miss my warmthanf my light." Grover. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Heheheh Wwoooopssss! I miss my warmth and my light. sorry! ); |
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