Open Poetry #31 |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
When you fill my mind thoughts never wander but gather like clouds of pleasure pressing in on all sides until the rains come and wash all anxiety away ~ Purifying, river of love carry my passions to the sea |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Flows real nice... good work! Grover. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmmm...that's very sweet |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Robert, I really like this--I can visualize the warmly squeezed cloud pushing out the rain, purifying as it does. Very nice deep thoughts with a gentle visual flow. This one goes to thelibrary shelf so I can grab it later. Take care, and have a great day, Robert. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write RF! Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nice work! |
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