Open Poetry #31 |
Evaporate |
Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
When was it, I wonder, the moment I first realized you were not a thing to posses? ~ Today, an early mist captured my imagination, and now, it is gone. ~ If I stood at the edge of all memory, would you be there to catch me, or fall into nothingness, evaporate? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
If I stood at the edge of all memory, would you be there to catch me, or fall into nothingness, evaporate This verse on it's own says so much. Enjoyed. Chris "At one glance |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I ponder this too, what a lovely poem. Enjoyed this thoroughly, Robert~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those who remain possessions are sometimes doomed to failure... Very good, Robert. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write here Robert. Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of something I would write beautifully sad |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Robert~ This is softly meaningful ... a pleasured read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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