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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Specifics Specific is a fleck of roam A speck upon a crest of foam Taking place a moment’s life Like a note upon a fife It is the color of a flare It is the answer of a dare It is the playful dance and leap It is the pile the broom would sweep. It is the tip within the sky It is the paint brush of apply It is a turn within a bend But never, ever does it end It is a brick upon a brick It is the mortar of the thick It is the road you wish to go It is the flow you wish to know. Specific is a candles bright That may or may not light a light |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even logic can be painted brilliantly, can it not, Sy? Just as you do, you do for all of us. Good morning, Sy...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning m'friend. Well, just look at these words of wisdom this morn! Excellent write Sy! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy you specifically light candles of wisdom. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautifuly lyrical! Eric |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I speicfically, liked all of this! Wonderful as always Sy!  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See-moore Bouncy lyrics, whimsical..Bright Yet thought provoking, especially at the end enjoyed ______ice ><> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How true this is... I always love reading your rhyme dear Sy, but even more the timely messages and the hope you lend through your poetry. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Specific is a candles bright That may or may not light a light Love this, Seymour. So true.  Hugs  Ethel |
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