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Open Poetry #31

somewhere beyond November

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2004-02-17 02:34 AM

sky’s the ocean waves weep
in tired songs many river banks talk
today you can hear them all night long I
see this morning the sky is falling white
in silence steals beyond the eastern
hills away withdrawn a caress
for another’s innocent
day such drifting
now quenched
and her beauty
lies over melting
bed of dread with sun
sets blushed crimson over
all this place she spread bringing
promises of another dawn soon shall
rise a sun to salute our wondering eyes
smiling as fair as she could see but with
out the white surprise and as mother
nature moves our head we still
are all deceived

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Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-02-17 02:44 AM

very nice prelude to spring

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-17 03:11 AM

beautiful scenery

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-02-17 01:13 PM

Lucky~
I saved this one to carry me through the afternooning~

Lovely ... and again I state that it is SO GOSH DARNED GOOD to read you here again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-02-17 07:50 PM

lucky

Beautiful imagery with an underlying feel of heart song. I echo Marge in it being good to see you!

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