Open Poetry #31 |
You may not return, but then again. . . really |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
where are the dresses with ruffled slips that floated like faery wings of butterflies and do tell me where have the blowing leaves gone with autumn skies so fair almost like foreign questions teasing minds of old recollections while they in politely followed having lips grave in silence of first still of white and these crazy miserable writes with company in tight quartered houses & kids fighting over times to sleep times to meet a baby staring owl surely sent by oddity nothing you'd quite believe but neighbors want to know sharing in conquest blessings flustered tittered on a phrase natures handed down games spring alive from graves things disappear from the ice box nobody knows how still good-nights pray long for purpose Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
wow! Its so beautiful and its pleasing to the eye! thats true tallent there! heh...seriously though very nicely done, thought provoking definitly. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
WOW reads like suburbia, (not sure though) but awesome nonetheless |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome indeed...glad you're back around |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ I smile so gently at the beauty of your thoughts ... such a treasured pleasure to read you~ Nobody ... but NOBODY, squeezes more out of the words ... then lays them down in pleasing array~ YOU ARE a treasure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
lucky You see inside of many things I've missed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Really enjoyed reading this smooth flowing poem! Grover. |
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