Open Poetry #31 |
Your Love Remains Inlaid |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * Our passion starts to burn As we lay beside the fire Just like a master craftsman You've unlocked my deep desire As my heartbeat starts to quicken You trace my body with your finger Upon my upturned mouth Is where you always linger Sweat moves down my body Over every curve and mound You find the centre of my pleasure While from my lips escapes a sound We rock the world's foundations In our moment of ecstasy As I surrender to your charms And let your love envelop me I feel your love flow through me Like a gentle warm cascade And in the afterglow of love Your love remains inlaid We lay here in all our glory Amongst the remnants of our pleasure I have so much love for you That I am unable to measure Love will come again In the early hours of dawn As I awaken to your touch And once again I am reborn I am in motion |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Sweat moves down my body Over every curve and mound You find the centre of my pleasure While from my lips escapes a sound" BRB, have to take a cold shower after reading this one...lol Very nice sensual, romantic poem enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue -- another gorgeous love poem from you! Must be love! ......hugs, jo |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Anyone who knows me even a tad will know that I was sure to enjoy this little treat. Very sensual and done in a way that provokes thought enough to burn the wick twice. Lovely read with a very smooth flow about it. I truely enjoyed this one thoroughly. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sue, You are hot woman....shew!!!! very passionate...makes we sit here in want and need of that kind of pleasure and love... great poetry as usual! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sensual...wonderfully done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSue~ The fires of Passion burn brightly~ This is sensually beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful captured moment! Eric |
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