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Hawk is the start to answer a question
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Hawk is the start to answer a question |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hawk arose like I suppose most words do, out of nothing and better confined to the same, and I wrote an idea from that **************************************** I will walk with you If I can reach you I can not see you But can I reach you They wait on my left Green beneath Yes I will reach you But why can I not see you I will sing to you But no sweet love Can I see tonight Around my heart I bear your hair For my courage To seek you there And you my spouse Take my ring I take yours Go fly you say That is your choice Why should I leave Fool to seek death's embrace I didn’t call you here To waste your life Take my hand As I take your ring Now as Hawks We will sing |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
a beautiful poem, could read it five more times and find something different in it every time the only people for me are the mad ones-mad to live, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at once--jack kerouac |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This has a soaring feeling about it, Dave. I really enjoyed it and am putting in the vault! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
A belated thanks Maybe I will start to write but I dont know how in this day and age people would take people who are naturally screwed up and violent yet only as told and by inclination. I could write it as Fantasy and they are heroes, write it as life and they are heading for Texas. Dave |
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