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Open Poetry #31

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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2004-02-16 01:14 PM

Clanking rustic blooms,
caressing damp needless blossoms.
of nectar, a sweetness.

Cringing solitude,
slumped against discomfort.
of pain, and shallowness.

Deprived crankiness,
deluted and dry.
of this and thatness.

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-02-16 01:15 PM

"Deprived crankiness,
deluted and dry.
of this and thatness."

Excellent write Kellie..very much enjoyed.
Especially love the above lines.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-16 02:29 PM

An exciting write... enjoyed it alot! Grover.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-02-16 02:31 PM

Nancy picked my favorite lines...enjoyed this, Kellie!

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