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When Angels Cry (Duet With Gentle Spirit)
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When Angels Cry (Duet With Gentle Spirit) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Yay! I just want to specially thank Donna for writing such a beautiful duet with me, you truly are a comforting spirit to us all! (sends angel hugs to Donna)  ) When Angels Cry By: Donna Smith and Noah Eaton 2/5/04 A little girl dreams for a yellow dove to fly into her room, to lift her to the golden gatekeeper, send letters of hope to God soon A little boy imagines a unicorn, where he holds a sense of awe, he wants heaven to become his friend, he dreams of holding the hand of God Unless you have something to give, they can see freedom isn't free, so when we can't all donate, Lord, the angels must be crying.  A mother’s heart cries out for her children alone, somewhere out there, her soul burdened with worries and sorrow she prays to God through tears. A father provides for his family struggles on roads of strife, he gives thanks to the heavens above us for blessing him through life. When the world is filled with suffering, and darkness fills the skies, when peace no longer whispers on the winds, Lord, you can hear the angels cry.  "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Impressive! Grover. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bravo!! A beautiful duet you two! Yes indeed there are times you can hear the angels cry.. ~Heart hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a very beautiful duet you two made!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've both matched the talents of each other, and then surpassed that with the underlying message. Well done, the both of you! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written!! Fantastic to see your collective talents create something as wonderful as this. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, what lovely duet. A keeper for sure. Congrats you two!! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I knew this was going to be good when I saw the names... and I wasn't mistaken. *S* You write so well together... beautiful work! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - wow, you two did well with this, my congratulations to you both... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it   |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much for reading our offering. It is always such a joy writing duets with Noah.  Noah sweetie, you have a way of making my words even better when they blend with yours and I look forward to the next duet we do together. Maybe I will come across the original one that we lost and we can finish it some day, that would be fantastic! It might take me awhile to find it printed somewhere safely awaiting the right moment...at least I hope anyhow! lol... Again my thanks to all and to my duet buddie, Hugs and peace. ~D~ It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Two voices...expressed beautifuly as one. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Eric. Writing with Noah is a journey into poetry that I love! |
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