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Body Language Reads Love
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Body Language Reads Love |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Body Language Reads Love In those dreams of longing I'm given passionate wings Reaching the moonlit tide Met where my lover sings Ocean glistens in starlight Neath moonlight reflection He knelt down beside me Placed kisses of affection Rolling waves lap the sand Hearts beating in harmony Lovers in rhythmic unison Being at one with the sea Eyes knew from the glance As the moon shines above Our lips trace the desires Body language reads love Hope©2004 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, wow, dear Hope, this is wonderfully sensual and romantic. Bravo! Love, Margherita  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Margherita , so pleased you enjoyed ... I did change the last verse to... Eyes knew from the glance As the moon shines above Our lips trace over desires Body language spoke love Hope |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, this little change makes it even more fluid and eloquent. "Body language spoke love" ... yes perfect. Hugs. Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks again Margherita for you feedback , it helps in many ways Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Now this is the kind of poetry, I'm glad to see you write Hope! It's more becoming, your warm hearted nature I hope your happiness, is lasting, and blissful  |
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