Open Poetry #31 |
Blue Lace and Episodes of You |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Blue Lace and Episodes of You My eyes trail the white, as it falls softly, in silence, wondering how your footprints would look outside my door. Stillness powers my heart as I close my thoughts to the freeze of time and let you carry me off to the lacy blue of the night. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
I loved the vivid discriptions...I myself have felt such things...ejoyable. =)Ü ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Maureen, I really enjoyed this piece. One can just imagine this daydream unfolding, all within the soothing confines of your warm home. Your picture is radiant! Nice to read you again! Richy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Guardurthoughts, thank you *s Richy, you are in your warm confines and we are having another snowstorm....I am up early, as I stayed on the first level sleeping by the fire waiting for the snow to fall and to stop....eventually... so I can go out and shovel before the next one comes Still too dark out Thanks and nice to see you this morning Maureen |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
So sorry to hear about the cold weather Maureen. Wow, all that shoveling business sounds like a real bummer! Well you hang in there ok, and be careful out in that stuff. I imagine it can be real slippery. Well, you keep that fire burning, and try to stay warm all right? Take Care, Richy |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
"lacy blue of the night"... that phrase is delicious, but I don't know why... very nice! McLean |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Vivid in image and feeling. I really enjoyed how much you have packed in here...~P |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynterLace~ This is about as purty as it gets~ Still thinking you need to get your little hidey wonkus down here to Florida ... a warm and beautiful 74 degrees yesterday~ Oh ... I know .... sorry 'bout that !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
14 degrees here right now Margie...and I am soaked from shoveling and am going to warm up the best way I know how... warm vanilla bath more snow and sleet to follow today~~ Was it I that said how much I loved snow... brrrrrrrrrr *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
They would be size 10...bootprints, well if they had to be footprints, perhaps a 9 1/2...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ at you JamesM M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pure and pretty. TD |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is such a beautiful escape, sweet friend, I send angel friendship hugs your way on this cold evening, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a beautiful piece |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ok...that was good "lacy blue of the night" you better apologize to the moody blues, cause you just knocked their "white satin" right the door! just was a super gorgeous line that should be sung out loud! ~Dawn |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
How beautiful is this then?!! It's a mix of snow, sleet and rain here to-day. I wouldn't want to be carried off into this mess! lol. Hmmm....then again.... hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well, Maureen, even if the snow isn't beautiful when you're out there shoveling it....you sure can write about it beautifully. I love that "lacy blue of the night", too. Hugs, you Ethel |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Beautiful Maureen. |
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