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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Most stuff I write is part of something else I want to do. It is just a case of the day job paying the mortgage unfortunately it is IT which means the evenings are devoted to the day job as well. The words like the Boy's and other words I published earlier are characters and come from something I will write ************************************************* I call you Hawk because you see me No matter where I am Where I look I see your eyes You tell me to nod To smile To duck To come home A wild day beckons I don’t need your eyes I need you Here Faintly he heard: Only I can translate your vision Your life on my breath As Custom dictates From beyond the hill and across the darkness, the words written in silence: I am the darkness I seek my maiden fair In tattered and torn velvet dress To be engulfed in hair To feel her body warm For me she wear’s no veil Just eyes that stare ahead And a face below the pale |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When we embrace the shadow, we see with more clarity. You made me see the Hawk's eyes and feel the atmosphere of darkness. You explore beautifully. Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dave~ 'From beyond the hill and across the darkness, the words written in silence: I am the darkness I seek my maiden fair In tattered and torn velvet dress To be engulfed in hair To feel her body warm For me she wear’s no veil Just eyes that stare ahead And a face below the pale' Oh my ... I am caught up in these words~ Wherever it goes ... I want to be~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dave, this piece begs for 'more'...please?! Wonderfully penned. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh...an excellent write Dave! TD |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DavePage Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A good write, very nice images! Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
continue on and share, I enjoy you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hawk arose like I suppose most words do, out of nothing and better confined to the same, and I wrote an idea from that **************************************** I will walk with you If I can reach you I can not see you But can I reach you They wait on my left Green beneath Yes I will reach you But why can I not see you I will sing to you But no sweet love Can I see tonight Around my heart I bear your hair For my courage To seek you there And you my spouse Take my ring I take yours Go fly you say That is your choice Why should I leave Fool to seek death's embrace I didn’t call you here To waste your life Take my hand As I take your ring Now as Hawks We will sing |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I've reposted Hawk which is a sort of start but it goes back before that. Maybe with the nagging I will start to write some words to being the words. Dave |
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