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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2004-02-14 10:01 PM

Watching Him Sleep

Twilight lends the light,
dim, yet she can see the jut
of his jaw, the line of his cheek,
the slight upward curl of his lips
as he lies peaceful as a fed infant might,
his breath as light as the tufted cotton cradling
his sleepy head.

She watches him,
for minutes turn to hours,
the memories so thick
she must wipe them from her face

of when they held, enveloping each other
in the warmth of spent flesh
and quivering limbs, calm hush
following the erotic flush

and now she watches him
as hours turn to a lifetime--
She loves.

I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest.
~Dorene

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2004-02-14 11:46 PM

...beautiful write, my friend...and then some.

jwesley

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-15 03:55 AM

I remember watching...it was nice

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

3 posted 2004-02-15 06:39 AM

of when they held, enveloping each other
in the warmth of spent flesh
and quivering limbs, calm hush
following the erotic flush

so beautiful, so sensual.......

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-02-15 09:29 AM

"She loves"

Yes, we watch for hours what we love and we ponder over all that connects us.

This is very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-02-15 09:30 AM

Dorene~
Hey !

So nice to see you here~

Lovely penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-02-15 09:40 AM

Chanson
A delight to read.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

7 posted 2004-02-15 12:59 PM

jwesley-- A beautiful reply!

passing shadows-- So you understand. Thank you!

Youngatheart-- I am pleased the passage touched you!

Margherita-- Time seems to stand still when we watch those we love. Much thanks!

Marge-- It is nice for you to visit! Hugss

Seymour-- I am delighted you enjoyed!

Thank you all very much. hugsss

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-02-15 11:33 PM

Dear Chanson~
Thank you for this rock-a-bye~
and for every layer upon layer you wrote so well.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (02-16-2004 12:21 AM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

9 posted 2004-02-15 11:51 PM

ohh this is so sweet, so loving.
How beautiful this is, and how beautiful you are.
So tender...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

10 posted 2004-02-16 04:55 AM

I'm happy your enjoyed the layers, dear Blues. Thanks bunches!

Alyssa, such a lovely compliment. Thank you!

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