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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-02-14 03:32 PM

Languidly at ease in the vision of my dreams
the midnight of your soul reposes next to me.
A glass of wine, empty, still, indicative of will
reflects from the sky moon’s passionate desire.

Slowly as the rising sun life begins again
to encompass the needs of mankind’s reality
like thunder would split and torment the air
with the promise of rain not meant to fall today.

The heat of no release trails footsteps to the door
and dreams and real entwined run into twilight time
till together in the shadows they merge in memory
and settle in compartments of the deep unconscious mind.

I cry tonight my tears for love’s long waywardness
underneath a sky dark and somber like my fear
for night brings no relief or calm of my belief
when reality of day overshadows souls at play.

Languidly at ease - and I pray to be that way
until the will of time moves the glass of wine!

Helen

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-14 04:26 PM

Very good writing! Grover.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2004-02-14 04:52 PM

Very beautiful, strong and clear. Thank you for sharing this my friend.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2004-02-14 05:16 PM

Thanks again to you both. Glad you enjoyed the read.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-02-14 11:48 PM

...enjoyed much, my friend, and the depth of the read was wonderful.

jwesley

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2004-02-15 12:17 PM

Thanks so much jwesley. I do appreciate you reading and commenting.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-15 03:51 AM

you're not alone

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-02-15 09:59 AM

This is a deep and captivating write.
Love, Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

8 posted 2004-02-15 11:21 AM

Thanks passing shadows and Marherita for the read. Much appreciated.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2004-02-15 01:40 PM

Helen

Always wonderful to read your beautiful thoughts!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2004-02-15 06:51 PM

". . . until the will of time moves the glass of wine!"

Sometimes I wonder is we really "will" it to move, or hope it'll stay there forever...

Wonderfully written

jwesley

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

11 posted 2004-02-15 11:31 PM

Hi, jwesley. I guess it all depends what the glass would be moving towards as to whether we wish it to go or remain. Thanks for the read.

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