Open Poetry #31 |
Frangipani |
Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
With Frangipani the air is full sky clad in silk I take steps into you moving past the lie of reason into truth |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
here you go again - touching all those senses and sending thoughts deep inside me - loved this Martie - Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful. Beyond reason truth is found. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"moving past the lie of reason into truth" Wow!! ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
I have a candle of this fragrance. Lovely, strong but delicate to the senses. Bon-Bon |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Whew! I don’t know Martie, this one really got me! I hope your having the most wonderful day today, and that it continues throughout... When the evening belongs to you and yours, an no one else... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Martie-- an all encompassing, word-economical wizard with this! Grover. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome! Happy Valentine's Day dear lady. hugs, Chris |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully romantic! (kiss on cheek) Happy Valentines Day, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is...sooo..very nice |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Martie, you write THE most incredible poems! This one knocked me over. Beautiful, just beautiful .... Hugs, Marti |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Martie, this is one of shortest I've read of yours, but on of the greatest. jwesley |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Beautiful!!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
moving past the lie of reason into truth Wow Martie... what a GREAT line. What a GREAT poetess. M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Frangipani and truth go well together! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ So beautifully scented in the fragrance of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
sky clad in silk That's enough to move the reader, ever so gently. Much enjoyed your short form Martie~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
frilly panties? What? frangipani...oh, like I, (the male)(non florist type) is supposed to know. Great message Martie.. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marti, you have spun silken threads into a beautiful statement once again. Enjoyed! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
One of my favorite flowers... *S* Beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ing with the biggest Martie knows why~ LOVE YOU SISTER~ *Huglets* ~*Me ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wow Martie such a wonderful inscription to cast eyes upon. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A poem as sweet to mind taste as the Plumeria to the nose...love its brevity, yet it delivers a big story... enjoyed _______ice ><> |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And that is a good place to be. I remember the first time I smelled that scent...a rainy day in Hawaii, and a simple blossom...then a tree of them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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