Open Poetry #31 |
The Rain Comes |
Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
A bath from heaven drowning depression with every drop. And then you shine in the sunlight painting a rainbow of colour onto our darkened faces. We splash. We dance. We smile. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kicking Kim And we are happy, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
but after four days, I am ready for rest and sunshine |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Uplifting! Grover. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Thankyou for the responses, I really appreciate every comment. ^*Kim*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kimberley~ Now this is just a lovely word *gift*~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy puddle dance) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo adorable, yay, "we're singing in the rain, we're singing in the rain!" (smiles) God Bless You, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kimberly, tank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
A very pleasing ending and heartfelt write Kim, Wonderful job!! |
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