Open Poetry #31 |
Gifting |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gifting He gifts a coup of memories view Made of mornings crystal dew As flowers whisper wistful sighs The fragrance of a love-gone bye Underneath a sky of blue Dreaming in a mental coup Reeling in a fields appeal More real to him than any real As Jasper as translucent stone Shining through familiar tone Making mimes of happy past On strings that hold forever’s last An heir in symbols sweet estate He lives the past in full elate The playing of a piano-roll A figment of his heart and soul And in the grace he smiles in sleep Without a trace of tear in weep |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful gift on a lovely Valentine's Day! Give my regards to Isabelle this morning, Sy...thank her for letting you share yourself with us all! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, all that Karilea said Hope you spend a wonderful day with your Valentine M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - not much more I can add on this sunny Saturday morning... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Happy Valentines Day Sy-babers Randy brought me raspberry tea this morn Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Before I get carried away with the day, I send a Happy Valentine dear. Maureen, Happy Valentine sweet. Hugs. Bill, Thank you my friend. JM, Happy Valentine Tink. Miss you WWRS |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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"As Jasper as translucent stone Shining through familiar tone Making mimes of happy past On strings that hold forever’s last" Simply wonderful through and through not just this verse, whole poem too, written by our own sweet Sy, happy Valentines Day to you and yours! ~Sadie~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadie, You are a sweet lady. Happy Valentine. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words you penned for us this morning Sy! May you and Isabel have a wonderful Valentine's Day! Special tea this morn...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, You pour I'll drink, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good Morning Sy ~~ Your words and thoughts make my heart leap. A wonderful poem. Thank you and wishing you and your bride a very Happy Valentine's Day. Smiles and Hugs, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, You are a sweetheart, thank you and Happy Valentine day. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "As Jasper as translucent stone Shining through familiar tone Making mimes of happy past On strings that hold forever’s last" I loved this! You are they honey on my toast. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You mean a sweet mouth full? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
He gifts a coup of memories view Made of mornings crystal dew As flowers whisper wistful sighs The fragrance of a love-gone bye Your words are dancing, right into my heart. Happy Valentine's Day, Poet! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you and a Happy Valentine to you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"An heir in symbols sweet estate He lives the past in full elate The playing of a piano-roll A figment of his heart and soul" Wonderful analogies always, especially here. Enjoyed this so much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you so much for the read and reply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*big smile* you always make me smile...hmmmm |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweet heart. |
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