Open Poetry #31 |
Kisses In Your Mind |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kisses In Your Mind It's early morn, the phone it rings Awakens me, gives start Was dreaming, I, a pleasant one No shadows in the dark. Had arms around me, warm and strong With breath an inch away When exhaled, tickled me a bit Preferred awhile to stay. It rang again, I let it go Too early still, was time Instead I rested, filled with thoughts Had kisses in my mind. Remembered when you planted them Not kisses, but the thoughts How often times you teased me so Eyes roaming body, soft. Until you saw me, on the edge Then lips to skin, would find You planted all the kiss of want As kiss thoughts in my mind. Whenever you're away from me And dreams take me on high The thoughts of lips on lips, of mine Replays in my mind's eye. Hoping that the same is true When times are tough or sad That kisses float from me to you When I am feeling "bad". So when your eyes upon this read No matter who, you'll find Someone out there loving you Sends kisses in your mind. M *2k "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (02-14-2004 08:05 AM).] |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
I really really love this! You have such a unique talent for arranging your words into beautiful phrases. Terrific!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - those lovely kisses in my mind you write about... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lovely dreams to linger on indeed. Beautifully expressed, dear Maureen. Love, Margherita |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
kisses in the mind , a excellent idea indeed , a matter of fact a just sent out a few hehheee thanks for the idea and for leting us all enjoy this one .... ..jwolf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh M...this is simply delightful! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh, this is lovely here is kisses on your page |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Remembered when you planted them Not kisses, but the thoughts How often times you teased me so Eyes roaming body, soft." This was absolutely wonderful, Maureen. I thoroughly enjoyed this from beginning to end. Such sweet sentiments and recollections ... and the flow was delightful. I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Maureen... So nice to have kisses on your mind. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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