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choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-02-13 02:05 PM

beyond the in and out,
In seeing, being seen
crystal mirrors facing-
gazes reach infinity.
Lost in the labyrinth's midst
familiar strangers;
strangers no longer
in the heart's home.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2004-02-13 02:34 PM

i thought that this one was great. it moved quickly but still slow enough to be understood.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-02-13 02:49 PM

many hearts fill the home
the home is in the ocean
all tributaries pour upon her

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2004-02-13 03:29 PM

familiar strangers;
strangers no longer
in the heart's home.

I always enjoy your work... and like this very much! *S*

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-02-13 05:05 PM

"In seeing, being seen
crystal mirrors facing-
gazes reach infinity.
Lost in the labyrinth's midst
familiar strangers; "

sort of like the poets here at passions..
we see everything of each other, feel everything of each other, yet still physical strangers....
this is different from you.....and i really like it!

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-02-13 06:01 PM

Amazing work! Grover.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-02-13 07:56 PM

choshi,
I liked this, reading it three times with each a different interpretation. There are a lot of places for a reader to go with this. Visual, analytical, wow...
~Sadie~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-02-13 10:05 PM

Neat write! Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-02-13 11:33 PM

Choshi -- precious! I always enjoy your work!

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-02-13 11:44 PM

I like this. It seems simple at first, and then it isn't, but it's warm.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-03-07 02:52 PM

*wondering how I missed this one*
sighing softly

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2004-03-07 07:37 PM

*wondering how I missed this one*
sighing softly

Well, thanks Dixie, for stopping back....~P

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2004-03-09 05:31 PM

"Strangers no longer in the heart's home"

Touchingly beautiful!
Love, Margherita

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

13 posted 2004-03-09 07:29 PM

"Strangers no longer in the heart's home"

Touchingly beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Thank you Margherita.....

~P

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2004-03-09 09:52 PM

you do these beautifully, so much said in such few words....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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