The Keys Beneath - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-02-13 12:04 PM

You're perfect pitch
symmetrical bliss
apostrophes and commas
that drip with success

you are truly blessed

poetic finesse

the attire of a squire

o those roses you gather

the eyes that adore you

you must fight off with a stick!!

my dear darling darkboy
how i'd love
for a moment
to be the keys that
pound beneath you

o YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-02-13 12:10 PM

writers and piano players make good lovers

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-02-13 12:12 PM

dixie girl, youre a trip ..love ya

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-02-13 12:18 PM

LOL @ Dixie-girl's reply.

This is a good one, Michele. Makes lots
of thoughts come to mind. HeeHee!!

Hugs

Ethel

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2004-02-13 01:56 PM

You're perfect pitch
symmetrical bliss
apostrophes and commas
that drip with success
~~~~~~<@>~~~~~
Success fades....
sweet nectar drips
from swollen rose red petals
parsed beyond infinity
of wide-awake dreams
dancing across sun-speckled sands
whole and in pieces:
all is bliss, all is bliss!

Now then!
Let's go snow-viewing--
Till we tumble down!
~Basho

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

5 posted 2004-02-13 03:02 PM

this poem right here gives me hope ... Wossa
the keys benieth lol i am impressed
wolf

PassionandFun
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 60

6 posted 2004-02-14 04:58 PM

very nice...Someone could be a very lucky man!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-02-14 05:46 PM

You made me smile dear Michelle.
This is lovely indeed!
Love, Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2004-02-14 05:48 PM

Sounds like this guy has all,
the right keys, to your heart...

Lucky him!

You have such passion Michelle

I hope you never lose it

Happy Valentines!

Richy

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

9 posted 2004-02-14 05:52 PM

Good play on words... very good poem! Grover.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.