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Open Poetry #31

My Lunch Today

Laoha
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 161
Nevada, USA

0 posted 2004-02-13 04:45 AM

My lunch

today
was a few drops
of tabasco

sprinkled
in a bowl
of pinto bean

soup
over a plate
of tossed green salads.

I found
my lunch today
very poetic.

2/12/2004

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Chinapoet

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2004-02-13 07:46 AM

ok besides the critique , did you really have that for lunch lol ,just kidding cool idea just needs more body (or some pizza)

wolfman

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-02-13 08:50 AM

Laoha
That would be a hot poetic. LOL enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-13 12:41 PM

cute

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