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Open Poetry #31

incomplete

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2004-02-12 11:46 PM

I return to where it all started
not far from the heart
broken slowly apart

Mending it back piece by piece
looking for the right fit
hoping to find a release

Seeking for the missing section
looking deep within wondering
if it is my own reflection

The Rogue

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2004-02-13 01:22 AM

This a sweet but sad sounding piece.
I hope your heart has been mended.

:-)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-02-13 03:45 AM

short and to the point, very emotional sad write

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-02-14 04:23 AM

Dear Thomas, how nice to see you are back on these pages ...

This is a powerful write about a process of heart-mending. Yes sometimes we feel incomplete.

But it is an illusion, you are whole by yourself. You are doing the right thing, looking deep within. There you find your divine essence, which is always whole.

Love and Light. Margherita

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