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As Two Hearts Become One
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As Two Hearts Become One |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 His words of love flow freely As they whisper through the trees Her beauty beyond compare Always brings him to his knees She moves her body closer Aching for his soft caress They are at one with Mother Nature Here in love's wilderness An eagle catches the thermals High above the mountainside They are captivated by each other As they let love be their guide He lays her down so gently Beside the water clear and blue Amongst a field of wildflowers He declares his love so true As the shadows start to lengthen And the day is nearly done Their souls will start rejoicing As two hearts become one * * * "You have intensified all colors, heightened all beauty, deepened all delight. I love you more than life, my beauty, my wonder" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (02-12-2004 11:09 PM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wow! not only did you "write" a very vivid lush picture, but the photo you added just tops it off! gorgeous! "You have intensified all colors, heightened all beauty, deepened all delight. I love you more than life, my beauty, my wonder" whoever that is meant for, i hope they return to you just as much beauty!  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As the shadows start to lengthen And the day is nearly done Their souls will start rejoicing As two hearts become one Sue, this is just the most beautiful poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you would make such a great romance novelist! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you so very much and I wish you all much love and happiness always. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: I've always loved this picture and now you have written beautiful words to go with it! A perfect combination! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream for this love ever so much as it must be the most precious gift in the world! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exraordinary poem, an A+++...! Grover. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sue, that was such a lovely image, and you conveyed it so beautifully... What a wonderful heart, you have |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Betty Lou - I am always so very grateful for your lovely comments and I'm so glad you liked the picture as much as I. Noah - You always say the sweetest things and I wish for you much love and happiness always. Grover - I am so humbled by your comment, thank you so much. Richy - You made me blush, my friend and I thank you for your unfailing kindness and support of my writing. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Suetang...This is a wonderfully romantic piece. Such great imagery in its verses. Fantastic Valentine's Day write. ***Ivy Rose |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
Suetang, This IS so romantic. I am going to keep this one. Dixie is so right. If you ever try her suggestion, let me know. I would love to read a whole book of your talent like this. mmmmmmmmmmmm...perfect! Youngatheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ Oh what beauty you convey in quilling of word-thoughts that wend this way~ LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think this is a piece that makes the reader dream of such a perfect connection of love. And well the "wilderness" is the right place you located this poem, adding to the sense of freedom. Very beautiful indeed. Love, Margherita |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so much for your lovely comments which are so much appreciated. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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