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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Excitement surges And dullest day brightens With mere sight of your name. Anticipation is richly rewarded As treasures tumble forth To treat discerning eyes With words well worth the wait! I cannot guess the destination When I walk into your world I only know I join your journey At every opportunity For you exceed All expectations of excellence Every time, every poem. Inhaling the flawless flow Of gem gifts from your pen, I savor the expansion Of awareness and imagination, Let your descriptions transport me As your experiences Become my own. I am hopelessly addicted But I cannot seek a cure, Only wait for my next fix. Have mercy upon me and Feed this hunger With your incredible words. I will read. For one of PIP's best... who posts all too seldom. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Humm..got me wondering now suthern.  An excellent write for whomever the intended. Hugs~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such gratitude expressed poetically...what a validation for this nameless Muse...~P |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Nice and very flattering tribute. I hope your inspiration happens in and catches it. Enjoyed. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
NHCIESANN...as in Now How I Earn Such A Nice Note. You can start a fine mystery game with a tribute like this. Well done!! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Suthern, this is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, I just know whoever this is dedicated to is going to cherish this always, this is a wonderful tribute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
suthern, You've expressed so well the feelings I have when I read the poetry of so many talented people here. When I think I've seen the best, then something is posted that is even better. Everyone keeps growing better! Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet tribute...it's wonderful how a poet can touch us in so many ways |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know the feelings, when some of our best are gone for awhile. When they return? Christmas! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whoever this is written for is bound to be sighing! Wonderful Ruth. hugs,Chris "At one glance |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Each of us has at least one PIP person whose work resonates particularly with our spirit. I know there are some for me, and yes one of them doesn't post very often at all. I wonder if they're the same person? I think too, that there are people who affect the whole group that way. You're one of those, though you don't know it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ruth, whoever this person is may not even know it. I hope that you sent this to them, though. I'm sure it would be very appreciated. It's beautiful. Hugs  Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernLady~ You touch hearts in return~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow you can just feel the electricity coming from this poem! Suthern, this was so sincere and sweet. I hope whoever this lucky dog is... lol that he figures it out, or better yet, you let him know. Wow! It seems like Valentine’s Day or something around here! What? It’s tomorrow! Yikes! Hey Toe... where’d you say that Wal-Mart was...? That’s the thing about Toe... he’s always there, when you don’t, need him... Wonderful Poem Suthern! I hope everything works out really groovy! What? They don’t say that any more either? Yeeesh!  Oh... and Happy Valentines Day!!!!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very sweet write gal.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I always have that anticipation and expectation... nicely written *s M |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
He may be here, Suthern Belle Answering your ad. Writing words you love so well, Though they rhyme real bad. Wooing you with simple words Front a dime store unlined pad. Then dashing off to parts unheard Before he can be had. Stealing time-worn lines, Plagiarizing like a cad, As your heartstrings pine, Making you feel so sad. Who is this of whom you write? Where is this scalawag? A rascal stealing in at night, To share your sleeping bag? Where is this secret poet Who makes you feel so glad? Why does he make you show it, When you're feeling sad? I have not a single clue! Though he sounds like a stag. I hope this devil respects you, More than a toe rag. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Excitement surges And dullest day brightens With mere sight of your name. Anticipation is richly rewarded As treasures tumble forth ========================== Ahh yes...I was just talking about this the other day...how certain poets work effects on a deeper level....when I read them I get what I call "poetic tingles" .... NO-- NOT THOSE KIND OF TINGLES!!! get it out of the gutter.. lol  Some names do light up todays topics and for those who dont post as often as we wish...thank goodness for the archives and me mothy library. Theres a whole lotta tingling in there A gracious and sincere tribute to fave poets from one of our faves. Well I cant say what I might believe ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Enchantress: Thank you so very much! *S* choshi: I hope they agree. *S* Thank you very much! *S* RSWells: I do, too… very much. *S* Thank you! *S* kayjay: Just by being yourself! *S* Thank you so much… I wasn’t intending to be mysterious… just a tad ambiguous. *G* M’toe: I cherish their words… simply hope they read mine and know. *S* Thank you very much! *S* Sadelite: Yes… they do! *S* And the development is delightful… a literary treat to luxuriate in! *S* PS: That’s so true… We can feel we’re all alone… then someone who doesn’t even know us writes us with their pen… or the person we’d like to be. *S* Thank you very much! *S* Sunshine: And New Year’s Eve, the 4th of July, chocolate Easter bunnies… definitely a time for Thanksgiving. *G* Nightshade: I hope those sighs push a pen! LOL Thank you very much… I’m so glad you like! *S* Ratleader: What an incredibly nice thing to say! *S* I thank you so very much, my friend. *S* vandana: Thank you! *S* garysgirl: Thank you so much, sweet lady… I may just do that! *S* Marge: Aw, my friend… you sure know the way to mine. *S Thank you! *S* Richy: Did I say “he?” LOL Thank you, my friend… Groovy is good… *S* I hope this poet knows already... and heeds. *S* Toerag: Thank you very much! *S* nakdthoughts: It’s like a present from someone who knows your heart… you just KNOW it will be good… whatever it is. *S* Thank you so much! *S* LJA: “Where is this secret poet Who makes you feel so glad?” LOL Why… right here in the blue pages, sir! *S* Where else? *S* Thank you so much… loved your poetic response! *S* JM: ROFLMAO… Well… maybe some of THOSE tingles, too! LOL Thank you very much, dear lady… I swear there’s a glow on the screen when certain names appear. *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I cannot guess the destination When I walk into your world I only know I join your journey At every opportunity For you exceed All expectations of excellence Every time, every poem. Oh dear, and here I was wondering if it was just me!! Your writing is all that sweet suthern lady~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, Bluesy gal... how dear you are... thank you so much! *S* Yes... there are some I'd pay good money to see post daily... or even hourly... and still I'd want more! *S* |
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