You Are the One - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #31

You Are the One

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

0 posted 2004-02-12 02:58 AM

You are the one I've searched for
You're the only one I need
You alone can make me whole
Myself and I have agreed

This waithing thing, it's hard for me
For I want you in my arms
I want to feel you next to me
I long to feel your charms

The things I want, I cannot have
At least not here and now
And though I do not understand
To your wishes I shall bow

I'll wait until the sun is black
And it's light no longer shines
I'll wait until the sky at night
Is filled with new designs

Just keep in mind I'm waiting here
Hanging on your every expression
Don't make me wait my whole life through
For I long for our progression

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

Death
Member

since 2001-05-26

Posts 112
Twilight

1 posted 2004-02-12 03:03 AM

Stepping forward into a new and wondrous sounding light.

Reallly like the line where you state Myself and agree.

Well Done

"Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone."

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-02-12 03:13 AM

very nice!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-02-12 03:41 AM

beautiful piece

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2004-02-13 12:42 PM

You are the one I've searched for
You're the only one I need
You alone can make me whole
Myself and I have agreed

When you can overcome all the doubts and arguments with self and KNOW who you need... it's worth waiting for. *S* I like this very much! *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-02-13 01:27 PM

Hi Joe!
Very nicely penned...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.