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Once Lost, Now Found. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I don’t like it, When my bed, Is only warm enough for one. I’m alone. Virtually alone….For now. I know, I was made for something, So much more than this. I’ve found my answer. Him. I need nothing else. He is the only thing I crave. He is the only thing, That makes me happy. Anymore… I know, I was made for something, So much more than this. I’ve found my answer. Him. I don’t need, or have any desire, To keep searching. I’ve found all I’ll ever need. Not many people, Have the privilege to say that. My world, My life, My love, My soul. Goes to him. "I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Well done, I enjoyed this poem. The fact that you feel completed is blatant in this piece. Enjoy it. Paragon |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
oh wow. It is awesome. I love it soo much, i feel that way about a special someone myself... Very awesome write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Ixxi Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 77England |
I liked the way you wrote quite a positive poem, but somehow created a sort of negative effect, if you know what I mean. I don't mean that it's a bad poem! This is a situation that all of us will probably go through at some point in our lives. This poem really does show how lots of people feel. I liked it, it's not the best poem in the world, but it's worth reading. |
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