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Missing Pieces |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Something is missing within me the days only make my heart turn cold I go through the motions, I make people believe this facade about me. As soon as the doors close and the lights go out, I am alone, all alone. Insecurities rage in my head whispering memories of my defeat. I've always felt like I wasn't good enough, or smart enough or even pretty enough for anyone to love me. Friends come and go these days and slide the kinfe in my back deeper, when they think I'm not looking. Their incompassion used to hurt me but somewhere along the line, I stopped caring about them and even about myself. Something is missing within me and I've run out of tears to cry. Everywhere I turn, it's another happy face another celebration of someone's perfect life. Bring out the confetti, turn the music up louder maybe if you try hard enough, it will drown out the sound of my screams Because when someone else is suffering, people don't know what to do. They pat your shoulder in that awkward way and say that things will be okay, promising to give you a call sometime. But my phone has yet to ring, I've been staring at it for days and those people who said that they would be there for me aren't... and I'm left here to clean up the mess. Something has been missing within me I've felt it inside my heart for awhile now, only I was too ashamed to admit it. I've never been one to say I need help and it seems like whenever I open my mouth these days, everyone takes off running in the opposite direction. I'm sorry for being such a screwup but would someone please love me anyway? I long for someone to put their arms around me and hug me like they actually mean it. I've been feeling so empty, I could really use a friend. This is my plea, can you hear it? I'm pouring my soul out to you now. Just me and this blue ink pen, no one else around for miles. And I'd really like to not feel so sad anymore and I really miss not having you in my life, so would you please come back, so I can finally feel complete again? |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow, i really love this poem. Very... just wow. If you need someone to talk to, jsut email me. I'll be there. I know how you feel. Your friends say they will be there for you, but dont wanna have to put in the time, and effort. yes, i know it all too well. It is very much screwed up how some poeple are. ~LoL~ Very powerful write chica. lol I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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a123 Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 72 |
you write really well.and what is more important is that you have conveyed whatever you are feeling. i would love to be your friend.can i write to you?everything will pass believe me i feel that way too sometimes. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I read through this poem and thought WHOA this is awesome when I finished. I just wanted to read over it again and again. The words show a lot of emotion...good work, as always! ~Jess  Kiss, n. A word invented by the poets as a rhyme for bliss. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow...That difently drives the point home. This was completely awesome. VERY VERY well done! Please keep writing, I'm sure we would all like to read more of your stuff, I know I would.  "I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne |
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