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Teen Poetry #7

Your Words (revised)

Peach
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 33

0 posted 2004-03-14 02:26 PM

Your words infiltrated my mind
like a knife
on its way to stab my heart
My face
immediately drenched in tears
as I tried to understand
Mad enough
that I just want to walk away
forever
yet I'm still begging, pleading
for you to take it back
the words
should have been unforgivable
but
the emptiness I feel
wants to let you back in
I even begin
to blame myself
telling myself
that I should ask for forgiveness
although
I know I'm innocent
I just want you here
I want you
to glue back the pieces of my heart
that you
so clumsily threw to the ground

I'm still waiting
by the phone
Waiting for you to call
tell me
you want me back
Why aren't you calling?
I'm expecting your call
Expecting something
that isn't going to happen
fooling myself,
deceiving my mind
believing a fantasy

Why is the world still turning?
It feels like life is over,
like everything
should stand still
Why are people smiling?
How can they be happy
when everything is so horrible?

Your words were always so perfect
you made bad moods vanish
with one whisper
But then you made everything
come crashing down
with just
a few harsh words
How could you be so cruel?
You changed everything,
ruined everything
in a single moment
piercing me with your words

If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-14 02:34 PM

ouch

I know how this hurts...but life doesn't stop
you'll see

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-03-17 07:25 PM

sounds like the dude messed up BIG time there. I'm sorry for what your going through or went through. It hurts, it always hurts, but then you always move on, so i guess it all works out. From what you wrote it sounds like HE needs to be the one, wanting and pleading and begging for you back. If he isnt, well, then he isnt worth it, or worth your time. I hope everything works out! If ya ever need to talk, i'm here.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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