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My Destruction
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My Destruction |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You’ve destroyed me. You’ve taken every living piece of me, And annihilated it. Part by part. Bit by bit. I’ll never be whole again. It’s like taking a piece of paper, And crumpling it. It shall never be right again. I am that piece of paper. I hate the way you make me feel, And I hate the way you scream at me. I hate the way you criticize me, And I hate the way you expect so much…. You say that I lied to you... Well…yes…but you’ve lied to me too, So we’re not any better than each other. You said “Let me be a part of your life.” And I did… Look where it got me now. Look at me! Shattered! Because of you! Once I leave, Don’t look forward to my return, Because there won’t be one. I’ll be gone forever, from you. I’ll never, EVER come back. Don’t look at me, With tear streaked eyes, You’ve brought this upon yourself, Through so many years. I do not feel pity for you, My heart is incapable of it. You know why? Because you have turned me cold. Numb. Like steel. My heart does not warm for you....not anymore. "Pain is just weakness escaping the body." |
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Melodious_silence Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 37 |
I love your quote. I'm truely sorry you're going through so much pain, it was a lovely poem, and well appreciated. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I like this one, a lot. Very... intense. I could feel your pain, and well... bitterness, atleast what i think is bitterness. Very awesome write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Yeah..this one is quite bitter...But the subject I wrote about could be nothing but bitter..So this was the result of those feelings. I'm glad you two liked this, thanks for the comments. "I...I bleed...For no one..but myself...For me and no one else!"~ MudVaYne |
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