Teen Poetry #7 |
show your worth. |
muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
these are just thoughts i mustered up, which kind of give a poetic feel....enjoy and give comments on the writing, not the situation. please. i fear im losing it, losing every bit of me i had to a world where love is a crime, and death is a sin surrounded by white walls and only dreams of sanity. broken mirrors behind a forbidden glass tombs of laughter with no one smiling how do you dream happy dreams without a pleasent thought i deny the truth i deny reality i will not accept it who am i to judge? who is anyone to judge? each person has encounters with dilemmas some triumphant and some not so much i am not perfect and neither is the person who walks beside me take off your foolish masks wear your own shoes and run away run as you are with your true self shining through run at your own pase not by the way of others cry out your selfish ways breath in new life and strive for your best as each day is getting longer its shrinking me into a tiny secluded box of empty adventures and hopeless dreams oh fresh new day you bring promises for the future promises for my life and who i'll become i beg of you oh new beginning give ME a chance to show my worth |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this, I believe all of us could relate to some part of this in one way or another. Nice write. "And my heart still pumps twice as fast whenever you walk by. Cause I still love you."~ Blindside |
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