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Teen Poetry #7

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SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2004-03-05 03:10 AM

I saw her kiss you,

She said she missed you,

Can’t you see you’re tearing me apart,

Every, every day,

You don’t see me cry,

You don’t even try,

Why do you love her?

Is there something wrong with me?

Oh why can’t you see,

I’m not deformed,

I have feelings too,

I have feelings for you,

You don’t even care,

You don’t know I’m there,

All I am to you is a friend,

To just be there in the end,

I am a shoulder to cry on,

We were once so close,

But times have changed,

And now I’m more mature,

I see how you love her,

So I’ll bow out ,

And wish you the best,

Nothing but happiness,

But never forget,

I love you.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2004-03-06 09:25 AM

ummm....hmmm....I didn't really like this. It was too straight forward and the rhyming pattern was one that reminded me of a nursery rhyme. sorry

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