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Teen Poetry #7

Just You

HeroicVillan
Junior Member

since 2002-11-09

Posts 34
Lost.....

0 posted 2004-03-03 10:57 PM

I spend all this time searching,
for who I really want to be.
One step closer until I see,
till i see into the pool.
Your eyes, so deep, so blue.
Reflecting back at me's a fool.
All that I could ever be is me
and all I'd ever want is you.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2004-03-06 12:43 PM

I liked this one, I found it simple but yet refreshing.

-Ash

Im a child.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-03-06 01:08 PM

Wow, I really like this one. Especially the end, it tied it up just right.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

aRiEsAnGeL
Member

since 2004-03-04

Posts 53
Florida

3 posted 2004-03-14 11:11 AM

i loved this one........it gave me goosebumps.Thank you.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-03-14 12:14 PM

short...but sweet. I like this.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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